Grim
Loved this book. Loved the story. Loved the characters. Had difficulty with word usage errors. Changing tenses and from first person to third person kept me from becoming totally engrossed in this book.
Would have been at least 4.5 stars with better proofreading. As is, 3 stars.
Having said that, I will read the next story in this series, hoping that the grammar will have improved.